DAY 3:
Hello!
Yesterday,
after I had sent the email to you, Angelina and I talked about what we should
do today. But she said that she already had plans for today, she was going to Canberra,
the capital of Australia. I didn’t have any plans for today so I asked her if it
was okay that I came with her, and she said that she would love that!
We went to
Canberra by bus and it took about 4 hours. All the way from Sydney to Canberra
we talked about what we were going to when we arrived. Angelina was thinking
that we could ride a hot air balloon and I suggested that we could visit the
national zoo and aquarium. So we decided to do both because I liked her idea
and she liked my idea as well. But we were not able to do both in one day so we
are staying two nights. So today we were riding a hot air balloon because
tomorrow it’s going to rain. And it was amazing! I could see the whole city and
much more. If you want to see some pictures I took from the hot air balloon you
can just email me. Because I’m bringing my camera with me, and it takes some
really great pictures.
But
tomorrow we are going to the national zoo and aquarium. I’m really excited!
Oh god!
It’s already 11 pm, so I need to go to sleep now but I’ll email you tomorrow night.
Love
Evelina
Well done, a great storyline along with great use of grammar, however, don't be afraid of commas!
SvaraRadera