måndag 14 mars 2016

Australia e-mail - 3

DAY 3:

Hello!

Yesterday, after I had sent the email to you, Angelina and I talked about what we should do today. But she said that she already had plans for today, she was going to Canberra, the capital of Australia. I didn’t have any plans for today so I asked her if it was okay that I came with her, and she said that she would love that!

We went to Canberra by bus and it took about 4 hours. All the way from Sydney to Canberra we talked about what we were going to when we arrived. Angelina was thinking that we could ride a hot air balloon and I suggested that we could visit the national zoo and aquarium. So we decided to do both because I liked her idea and she liked my idea as well. But we were not able to do both in one day so we are staying two nights. So today we were riding a hot air balloon because tomorrow it’s going to rain. And it was amazing! I could see the whole city and much more. If you want to see some pictures I took from the hot air balloon you can just email me. Because I’m bringing my camera with me, and it takes some really great pictures.

But tomorrow we are going to the national zoo and aquarium. I’m really excited!
Oh god! It’s already 11 pm, so I need to go to sleep now but I’ll email you tomorrow night.

Love

Evelina

1 kommentar:

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